一、写作技巧
变换句型结构，增加得分亮点
1.肯定不如双否好
Nothing is impossible.
(Everything is possible.)
2.陈述不如倒装妙
①以否定词开头，使用部分倒装语序。
Never
before had he earned so much money in his life.
归纳：其他的否定词（组），如seldom，hardly，little，no sooner等以及有否定意义的介词短语，如
in no case，at no time，by no means等放在句子开头时，句子用部分倒装语序。
Never will I forget you and
your kindness.
②以地点状语开头，使用完全倒装语序。
In front of the library stands
a hundred-year-old tree.（高级）
③“only+状语（从句）”置于句首，句子（主句）使用部分倒装语序，用来强调地点、时间、方式、条件等。
Only in this way can
I improve my English.
④“so+形容词／副词”置于句首，句子（主句）使用部分倒装语序。
So interesting was
the film that we all wanted to watch it a second time.
⑤as引导的倒装句。
Much as he enjoys it,
he doesn't want to buy it.
⑥Such is my understanding about
growing up.
3.主动不如被动巧
The ceremony was scheduled to be held on June 8, during which we
reviewed the past events and watched some videos about the heroic deeds of our
schoolmates in the battle against COVID-19. We are all deeply moved by
the ceremony, from which we realize that the sense of responsibility always
accompanies the process of our growth.
4.并列、复合得分高
有时为了使句子的连贯性更强，表达更为贴切、自然，我们可以在两个或多个简单句之间加上and，but，for（因为），or（或者，否则），while（而，却），not
only... but also...等并列连词（词组），使其成为并列句。有时则在两个或两个以上的简单句之间加上 because，although，when，where，why等连词，构成复合句。
①并列句
From this activity, we have realized that building up our body is of
great importance, and we have also learned more about "persistence
leads to success".
Very soon the children were busy popping the corn, while their
mother went out to buy the paper bags.
②定语从句
As for me, my English teacher is the person I respect most. She
is a warm-hearted and dedicated teacher, who has won general praise.
③状语从句
On the way, although some students fell behind, they kept running
until the finishing line.
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a
good one, too.
When he found that it was all to be his, he was so happy that he
could hardly speak, but his bright smiling face spoke for him.
④名词性从句
I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a
week-long summer exchange.
5.非谓语结构不能少
①用动词不定式短语
The purpose of this race was to inspire us students to pay more
attention to physical exercise.
I'm writing to ask for your help with our English short play
adapted from our English textbook.
②用现在分词短语
All the children came surrounding Bernard and they gave a basket
to Bernard.
There is a small river flowing through the farm.
③用过去分词短语
Surrounded by green trees, the farm is located at the
foot of the hill near our school.
④用独立主格结构
We worked in pairs, one picking peaches and the other carefully
putting them into a big box.
6.简单变身有妙招
①同位语
Mr Li, my English teacher, is one of respectable
people around us.
②形容词短语
The boy went home very late, hungry and tired.
③状语从句的省略
If possible, shall we meet you in your
office at 10 a.m. tomorrow?
While enjoying being close to nature, we
began to help pick peaches covering every tree.
④with复合结构
With you on the team, we are confident that we
can win the game.
7.篇章结构巧连贯
①表示举例的关联词语：for example，take. . .for example，for instance，such as，like. . .
②表示列举的关联词语：for one thing. . . (and) for another (thing) . . . ，in the first place，to begin with/to start
with，first
of all，first(ly) /second(ly) /third(ly)，besides，finally，last but not least，on the one hand. . .on the
other hand...
③表示转折的关联词语：but，however，while，otherwise...
④表示因果的关联词语：because，since，as，for，due to，owing to，thanks to，on account of，because of，as a result of，for this reason，so，therefore，so. . .that，thus...
⑤表示比较、对比的关联词语：like，unlike，but，however，whereas，on the other hand，on the contrary，nevertheless，similarly，compared to/with，just like，just as. . .
⑥表示时间的关联词语：at first/in the beginning，then，next，later，afterwards，(soon) after that，after a while，meanwhile，at last，finally，now，at present，in the past，recently，immediately，soon，at that moment，as soon as，the moment，from then on，from now on，at the same time，not...until，after，before，when，while，during...
⑦表示目的的关联词语：for this purpose，for the purpose of，so as to，so that，in order to，in order that...
⑧表示让步的关联词语：though，although，even if，even though，no matter how/what/who/.
. .
⑨表示条件的关联词语：if，unless，as long as，so long as，on condition that，in case，in case of. . .
⑩表示并列的关联词语：not only. . .but also，both. . .and，either. . .or，neither. . .nor，as well as. . .
⑪表示递进的关联词语：besides，what's more，what is worse，moreover，furthermore，in addition，on top of. . .
⑫表示强调的关联词语：without
any doubt，obviously，above all. . .
⑬表示概括的关联词语：in
general，to sum up，to conclude，in a word，in short，in brief，generally speaking，in conclusion，on the whole，all in all. . .
⑭表示观点的关联词语：in my opinion，in my view，from my point of view，as far as I'm concerned，as for me，personally，I think/believe. . .
在记叙文中常用one
day，at
first，then，later，afterwards，soon，before，after，when，while，as soon as，since，during，eventually，at last，finally，in the end，immediately等表示时间顺序的连词或连接性词语来叙述故事的发展过程或做某事的过程。
在议论文中，列举事实、陈述理由或说明原因时，常用
for one thing. . . (and) for another(thing). . .，in the first place，to begin with，first (ly)，second (ly)，third(ly)，in addition，besides，first and most important，last but not least等。这类连接词在近几年的高考书面表达中应用十分广泛。
二、写作素材
1. 道歉信
开头段：
（1）问候 （2）自我介绍 （3）对某事感到抱歉 （4）写信目的
How is everything going
these days? I am Li Hua, your best friend from No. 2 high school. The other
day, we made an appointment to go on a trip to Beijing on Sunday but I can't
make it. Now, I am writing to give you my heartfelt apology for it.
中间段：
（5）解释原因 （6）另一件事的意义 （7）希望对方能站在我的立场并给予理解 （8）想法弥补
The reason why I will be
unable to go with you is that the CCTV English speaking contest is going to
take place that day. As you know, I've been waiting for the chance for months.
Therefore, by no means can I miss it. On the one hand, I'm sure you will be
able to think in my position and if you were me, you would make the same
choice. On the other hand, I would appreciate it if you could allow me to make
another date to achieve our wishes.
结尾段：
（9）还望接受道歉并理解 （10）告诉我你的决定 （11）再次表示歉意
Hopefully you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Please send an email to me or give me a call to let me know your decision soon.
Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.
【高分模板】
Dear _______,
I am sorry to tell you that
________.（陈述道歉原因）Now I am writing you this letter of apology to show
my deep regret.
I hope you will understand
me and excuse me for ____________.（请求对方原谅的事由）The reason for my
delay/absence was/is that ____________.（解释导致错误的原因）Therefore ___________.
I sincerely hope that you
can accept my apology and understand it. I would appreciate your allowing me to
_____________.（提出补救措施）Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 申请信
开头段：
（1）问候 （2）自我介绍 （3）读到一个招聘广告 （4）写信目的
How is everything going
these days? I am Li Hua, a 18-year-old boy currently studying in Hongxing
middle school. I read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet,
employing Chinese students as part-time tutors of the Chinese language. Now, I
am writing to apply for the job.
中间段：
（5）引出申请原因 （6）优势一 （7）优势二 （8）优势三 （9）说明计划 （10）计划一 （11）计划二
There are three main reasons
why I am fit for the job. To begin with, Chinese is my mother tongue and I am
excellent at it. In addition, I have been learning English for 9 years with a good
command of oral and written English.
What's more, I am willing to
help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world
as well. Besides the advantages above, I also make a few plans for it. I am
going to communicate with the students first to know what they want to learn.
And then I will make every effort to get them interested in Chinese and Chinese
culture by telling stories, singing songs, playing games and so on.
结尾段：
（12）希望得到机会 （13）如果选中我会如何做 （14）盼望回复
Hopefully the chance would
be offered to me. If chosen, I would dedicate all my energy and wisdom to the
job. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
【高分模板】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm ____________.（简单的自我介绍）When
I was reading the advertisement, （表达看到相关广告后的感受）I think it's a good
opportunity for me to __________.（应聘的原因）Therefore I recommend
myself to you without hesitation.
I __________________.（陈述本人的性格优势）For
one thing, I can _____________.（陈述本人特长一）For another thing, I can _____________（陈述本人特长二）
Please contact me at ___________.（你的联系方式一：电话号码）Or
e-mail me at ________.（你的联系方式二：电子邮箱地址）
I am looking forward to your
early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3. 感谢信
开头段：
（1）问候（2）自我介绍（3）说明个人所得（4）写信目的
How is everything going these days? I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old boy
currently studying in Hongxing middle school. I won first prize in the CCTV Cup
National English Speaking Contest. Now, I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude
to you.
中间段：
（5）引出对方所为（6）对方做的第一件事（7）对方做的第二件事（8）对方做的第三件事
（9）总结说明这些事令人难忘
Every time I catch sight of our photos taken with you, I just can't help
thinking of what you have done for me. To begin with, it was so kind of you to
help me practice my oral English patiently. In addition, you taught me a lot of
advanced grammar, which really benefited me a lot. What's more, I shall always
remember you shared with me many outstanding English novels. Nothing will be
able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.
结尾段：
（10）代表……表示感谢（11）祝你万事如意（12）盼望回复
I, on behalf of my whole
family, would like to thank you again for what you have done for me. May you be
blessed in everything you do. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
【高分模板】
Dear
_________,（感谢对象）
I am writing to extend my
sincere gratitude to you for _____________.（感谢的原因）If it had not been for
your assistance in _____________, （对方给你的具体帮助）I fear that I would have
been _____________（没有对方帮助的结果）.
Everyone agrees that it is
you who ____________.（给出细节）
Again, I would like to
express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
